tentative title: THIS IS TRUE
"Long Haul is a house of women."
Gillian-owns 'Cool Summer Breeze" Moving company. Will not respond to any name other than (burly man's name) while moving furniture.
Lizzy- has the ability to heal small animals-- good scenes for relief from darker subjects
Jess- can fly, these scenes should receive a lot of attention, and work to communicate the sentiment of extreme LIGHTNESS but also the responsibility put on you by others when bestowed with such possibility to soar
Jenner- can emit shards of light from her skin. This begins to go wrong and cause unbearable pain mid-story. This is a metaphor for a transition which occurred in the house.
Kayla and Sarah live in an attic room in between floors in the house. Their room is always either SCREAMING with light, or completely black, and never in between. This greatly affects their perceptions, capabilities, and state of being. This could be really interesting... lots of options here. Six characters is a lot and they will have to be unfortunately paired in order to qualify the demands of a terse and meaningful short story.
(Maybe all the girls rooms each have one floor, like the stack house?)
in the same way that people's experiences and unique minds can create an invisible resume to qualify them for parts of life, perhaps the qualities of the women accumulate to provide something. Whether that is described more visually, like a chemical concoction, some surreal something or other happens. Thinking about how all the power rangers combined together to make the mega-zord basically. (Zord? is that what it was? Weird that I never realized how that word seems a lot like "God". Were the power rangers mega-religOOO??
Monday, August 1, 2011
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